Reviews for A Simple Act of Kindness
| journeymom | 2006.08.10 - 08:06PM | 1: Lucius and a...Muggle? | Signed |
| Aaah. I see the misunderstanding. In my first review I misspelled Lucius, "Lucious-oriented story", in January. My second note, two minutes later, I was castigating myself, "LuciUs, LuciUs". And I enjoyed this second read-through just as much as the first time. |
| tabitha | 2006.01.25 - 05:34PM | 1: Lucius and a...Muggle? | Signed |
| Dear writer, I LOVED this story. Please develop it further. It would be a real shame if the fans of pureblood didn't read a story where we find Lucius slowing coming around. That would be a very interest read. Any chance of it? |
| Chartreuse | 2006.01.20 - 08:44PM | 1: Lucius and a...Muggle? | Signed |
| This was very nice. Like the twist at the end (well we knew it was coming but it was nice anyway) I almost felt sorry for him! |
| Applekissis | 2006.01.09 - 06:50PM | 1: Lucius and a...Muggle? | Signed |
Wow..that was really good...It had me fooled though...lol
Author's Response: I'm glad you didn't see it coming; I strive to be somewhat original at least ;-) Thank you for reviewing. |
| journeymom | 2006.01.06 - 12:59PM | 1: Lucius and a...Muggle? | Signed |
It's LuciUs, LuciUs. Looking for the crack in the earth to open up and swallow me whole.
Author's Response: I'm afraid I don't understand what you are trying to say with your review. Do you think Lucius is OOC? Did I spell his name wrong occasionally? If you have constructive criticism, feel free to explain. |
| journeymom | 2006.01.06 - 12:57PM | 1: Lucius and a...Muggle? | Signed |
I love it! This is the first Lucious-oriented story I've read. You portray his wonderful, snobby attitude well.
Author's Response: thank you so much. I did my best to try and reason what Lucius would think and do in certain situations, but it is always nice to hear it comes across. Thank you. |
| RachelW | 2005.10.27 - 11:23PM | 1: Lucius and a...Muggle? | Signed |
I enjoyed the read, and somehow found myself craving a cup of hot tea and getting sleepy along with Lucius, and I'm not sure how that really came about; but now I'm wondering what conditioning they were talking about there too. Hmmm... will read again and see if I might've missed it this read. Good writing. :-)
Author's Response: Hahaha, I didn't know professor Snape's potion was THAT strong! I should have known I guess... Clues about what Snape and Hermione were trying to do can be found in their conversation at the end; especially Snape's remarks should help you along. thank you for a lovely, lovely review! |
| sophie | 2005.10.26 - 12:51PM | 1: Lucius and a...Muggle? | Signed |
Oh, do continue this please! It's really good!
Author's Response: Well...it is a one-shot and I have a WIP HG/LM on FFN. But thank you for the nice compliment! |
| Lyndie578 | 2005.10.22 - 09:02PM | 1: Lucius and a...Muggle? | Signed |
Cool. I love the plot twists! Thanks for the post!
Author's Response: Thank YOU for the review! It's very nice to hear people like the story..as I said in the AN, it was just one of that bunnies that refuses to go away (smile). |
| JTBJAB | 2005.10.22 - 01:55PM | 1: Lucius and a...Muggle? | Signed |
Oh please tell me you are going to continue this! There is so much potential!!!
Author's Response: This was originally meant as a one-shot and for now it will remain that. I have a large HG/LM story on FFN I want to finish first. But..I'll confess that since posting this story here i have been toying with ideas what the next chapter would be like... Thank you so much for the review. |
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