Reviews for Beauty Found Within the Beast
| SiriuslyDranged | 2005.10.08 - 01:45AM | 13: Shocking Arguments | Signed |
| OMG. I love the dramatic turn this has taken. Harry's in love with Mione! |
| Jewels | 2005.10.02 - 02:47AM | 13: Shocking Arguments | Signed |
Your story is so well written, I am loving it! More please!
Author's Response: Thank you, but I must say that the beta readers I have make it a much easier read. JessicaDamien, and notsosaintly do help me so much in making the story come together better with wording and punctuation. |
| Sleeping_Angel | 2005.09.30 - 12:38PM | 13: Shocking Arguments | Signed |
... Oooh. Dear. Luci is in trouble.
Author's Response: :-) I hope you are enjoying it. Two more chapters should be up soon. |
| phoenix | 2005.09.30 - 12:29AM | 13: Shocking Arguments | Signed |
Ah, okay, thanks for the clarification on the time. I had just had the impression it was a day. :)
Author's Response: Should be two more chapters coming your way soon. I hope! |
| phoenix | 2005.09.29 - 11:26PM | 13: Shocking Arguments | Signed |
Ah, so glad to see them together and the Lucius is finally moving on. I can definitely see Harry being livid over the whole thing. I like how you've shown that he loves her, but was able to give her up to Ron...I'm interested in seeing where this one goes...I guess the only really minor complaint I have is that it seems unlikely she would suffer from morning sickness so soon. Unless I missed something, hasn't it only been a day since they were together? Still a good story. :)
Author's Response: Oh, but Phoenix... this is a MAGICAL baby... They have been together a couple of times before she started feeling anything. AND as far as morning sickness goes, I started having it within the first week with both of my kids, so it can come on fast... I am glad you are liking it, though! |
| tjbaby | 2005.09.29 - 10:54PM | 13: Shocking Arguments | Signed |
| I take it she realised that Lucius knew all along? Wonderful. Can't wait for the next installment. |
| zoer | 2005.09.28 - 09:33PM | 13: Shocking Arguments | Signed |
How exciting.
Can't wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: Well, I just posted the final chapter. I do hope you will be pleased with how it ended... I do also plan a sequel for SS/GW, but we will see... |
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