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Reviews for Beauty Found Within the Beast

Sleeping_Angel2005.09.16 - 07:19PM9: Ghostly VisionsSigned
Oooh. Ooooooh. More! This is Faaaaantastic! I like the Hermione/Lucius Pairing... good on yaw!

SataiDelenn2005.09.14 - 07:47PM9: Ghostly VisionsSigned
Oh crap! Well, I knew it was Narcissa at least a chapter or so ago. Couldn't figure out why though until Draco's eyes watching Hermione was mentioned. Then I knew they were trapped. Well, I hope Hermione has the portkey that Harry sent her with her. That should help her escape from the death eaters. Beautiful and very sad so far. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Author's Response: hmm... Nope, no portkey anywhere near her. But don't worry. It won't stay sad. It has some uplifting moments, eventually...

tabitha2005.09.14 - 05:52PM9: Ghostly VisionsSigned
Boy, oh boy, you have put everything into this story. A little humor with the soap and shampoo, not to mention sexual excitement. Of course, the angst of Lucius's guilt and grief. Then there is the supernatural with Narcissa and Draco's ghosts. Such great! Now the gliffhanger! Honestly, this is one of the best Malfoy stories I have read on this website. I would like to submit a more complete review but can't wait for the next installment. Please, keep up the great work.

Author's Response: You Flatter me! I am blushing... This story is just very special to my heart. I had been playing with the idea for some time before I ever started writing. Honestly, my problem was I just could not figure out how to slide Snape into a role such as this. Then it hit me, Lucius was the one that would better fit into this. I love Severus, but he just could not be as tortured as Lucius could. And with the reviews I have received, I know for sure that I made the right decision! Thank you so much for the wonderful words! They made my day!

kathrynpotter2005.09.14 - 03:36AM9: Ghostly VisionsSigned
Aargh...great cliffhanger! I really like the way you are going with this. You have given Lucius a really interesting edge and Hermione is so endearingly nervous about showing any afection. Can't wait to find out who this mystery Death Eater is.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am so happy that you are enjoying it!

CallaHaruka2005.09.13 - 02:37AM9: Ghostly VisionsSigned
Gah! The evil cliffhanger! Excellent as usual; though maybe watch out for the excess 'had's (had stopped, had transpired)? Perhaps that's just how Hermione thinks, though. ^_^

Author's Response: LOL... Well, I guess I am more at fault for the HAD'S. I don't mean to. Oh well, it just sounded good at the time! Hope you are enjoying anyway!

phoenix2005.09.13 - 12:31AM9: Ghostly VisionsSigned
Wow! The plot really thickens. I like the idea that Lucius' guilt is holding the ghosts of his family in the real world. Very good idea...Now, I'm dying to find out who the mysterious Death Eater is. Don't keep us waiting too long. I'm sure the Lucius will be distraught by her disappearance, and if the others find out she's gone, I'm sure they'll blame Lucius. What a tangled web you weave. :)

Author's Response: You would never guess in a million years who the death eater is. You won't be expecting it, I can assure you! I am so glad you are enjoying my plot.




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