Reviews for Going Home (Extended Version)
| Firewall | 2006.09.07 - 08:19PM | 4: Etiquette shall soon exist no more | Signed |
| Hmmm, I was thinking Depp, too. Now I have to see if he managed to get himself invited into their bed. Nicely done. |
| Firewall | 2006.09.06 - 09:54PM | 2: My Whinstone House, My Castle | Signed |
| Another good chapter. Blaise is a bit of a tease if you ask me. Is he trying to galvanize Draco into movement? |
| Firewall | 2006.09.06 - 09:44PM | 1: A Prison of Larger Room | Signed |
| Great chapter. I was a little surprised she didn't recognize Blaise and Draco...I did! LOL |
| hp4freek | 2006.08.22 - 12:30AM | 4: Etiquette shall soon exist no more | Signed |
| Hmmm... I must say that I liked this. It was imaginative and fun, and it had great descriptions! =0) |
| tobydog | 2006.06.16 - 09:46AM | 1: A Prison of Larger Room | Signed |
| Enjoyable start. The only thing I don't get is that Hermione didn't recognize the boys. She remembers everything, doesn't she? At first I thought McGonagall modified her memories or something, but she understood everything they were talking about. Three years isn't that long, and unless they had disguised their appearances (which you don't mention), I can't imagine her not recognizing Malfoy. |
| tobydog | 2006.06.16 - 09:45AM | 4: Etiquette shall soon exist no more | Signed |
| The last couple of chapters were funny and cute, but don't go with the first part of the story. Why say that "the stag and the labrador need you to come home" at the beginning, when that obviously is not the case in the least. Why have insane!Ron and comatose!Harry in there at all? IMHO, it would be better as more of a fluffy one-shot with Hermione coming home and hooking up with Draco. Alternatively, it could be a long saga where you actually develop all these plot lines. |
| tobydog | 2006.06.16 - 09:23AM | 1: A Prison of Larger Room | Signed |
| Enjoyable start. The only thing I don't get is that Hermione didn't recognize the boys. She remembers everything, doesn't she? At first I thought McGonagall modified her memories or something, but she understood everything they were talking about. Three years isn't that long, and unless they had disguised their appearances (which you don't mention), I can't imagine her not recognizing Malfoy. |
| sayyida | 2006.03.29 - 05:26PM | 4: Etiquette shall soon exist no more | Signed |
| So darn cute and funny. Did you ever write a sequel? |
| SataiDelenn | 2005.10.14 - 04:48PM | 4: Etiquette shall soon exist no more | Signed |
| Well, I like this story and I hope that you choose to update sometime soon! |
| xxdrkanglsxx | 2005.09.11 - 11:14PM | 4: Etiquette shall soon exist no more | Signed |
| You had me giggling like some stupid lovesick teenager when you randomly had put Depp into the picture... XD |
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