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| MrMalfoysBitch | 2006.06.21 - 02:48PM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| SltherinBITCH
There should have been more romance and more sex!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Sorry to have disappointed you. This was not a PWP, and going from the end of the last one, this one was going to be more courtship. Romance can be present without sex. | |||
| ShilohDarke | 2006.06.05 - 11:44AM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| Very nice. I noticed a really interesting side effect with the lotion... (tee hee) Loved it. I enjoyed reading this story very much! Glad to see you have continued writing HG/LM stories... You do them quite well!
Shiloh Darke Author's Response: Thanks, Shiloh. This was a fun story for me to write. Ah, that lotion...Lucius could give me some any time *drool* I know. I'm pitiful LOL The next installment will be more Draco, but obviously, Lucius and Hermione will have to have their places. After that one, I think I'll tackle a future fic I've had bouncing around. :) | |||
| shameful_desire | 2006.05.29 - 05:01AM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| And I assure you, Lucius has not coerced me or used any sort of potion on me.” She still didn’t know the exact nature of the lotion he had given her, but she was reasonably certain it had no mind-altering properties.
On the ConTraRY....~
This is one of the rare fics where I suppose Harry is sensible. In my opinion, it would have been better for Hermione to keep her resolve and stay the determined and stubborn person she is (supposed) to be. Despite being the ultimate SxGod, I must say that he does know how to be a real bitch! I guess the whole manipulation and "achieve our ends" are inherent Slytherin qualities eh? You’re…Slytherin!”...very true Harry and how observant of him to state this, I'm suprised that even Hermione overlooked that fact!
Oh What Drama...XD
I honestly cannot wait for the end of this trilogy! I would prefer it if Hermione is a little less....naive (?) and to see her being more mature in the continuation of this fic. Perhaps she would truly learn about Lucius' nature and start to play her own game for once. But a trilogy would not suffice for all that now would it? hhahhhaa
Al;right then, update real soon!
p.s. it would be nice to see how Dracon is doing. Also if possible please could you include a little interaction between characters involved and Severus (it would be nice for him to make another appearance!), he is officially my favourite male Harry Pottercharacter. Lucius may be a sexGod but nothing beats my Severus! Author's Response: Thanks, shameful. :) Harry did make a good point, but Hermione has been a little Slytherin, too. I don't think of her as being as much naive, but realizing that she doesn't really have much of choice, not that it's a bad choice. After all, she was having an affair with him while married to Draco. *wink*...As for Snape, he will feature a bit more prominently in the next installment. Unfortunately, that one will have less Lucius and Hermione interacting with each other because it's supposed to be focused on Draco, but I expect it will have more scenes where Draco is talked about than this one had where Hermione was talked about and not present (which I think was one)...I really loved playing with Lucius in this one because he is not romantic just to be romantic and win her heart. | |||
| Citten | 2006.05.25 - 05:36PM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| NO YOU CANT JUST END IT HERE!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: Citten, I'm glad you loved the story. I will definitely be writing more as this storyline is not complete, just that chapter of it. :) | |||
| JTBJAB | 2006.05.25 - 01:34PM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| Fantastic chapter!
I'm glad the next installment won't be for a couple of months... as I'm not sure how much access I will have to a computer for the next 3 and bit months! *shakes head* I'm really looking forward to it though! Good luck with writing it, and well done with this one! Author's Response: Thanks a bunch, JTBJAB. I'm glad my need to finish other work coincides with your travel. :) I need to get home and take stock of my various projects again and see where it's all going and when I look like I'll be doing what. I don't want to make people wait as long as I did last time, I thought it was too long and longer than I had anticipated, but my darn muses had a bout of ADD. | |||
| Maddy Riddle | 2006.05.25 - 02:09AM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| Sorry it took me this long to read and review. Life has been demanding lately... (yes I do feel I have to say that because I did insist on the story to be finished). I love it. You manage to tell the story from Hermione's PoV without leaving me out of Lucius maneuvers to get her back. I would have wanted to see what they told the Grangers and how they reacted... but it's more morbid curiosity that something the story needed. It is also my curiosity that will beg you to write the last part of the trilogy soon. But take all the time you need to write it, I'm very happy with the end as it is. ;) Author's Response: Thanks, Maddy. And no worries on RL. We all have that, darn RL LOL. Of course I had to have Lucius's manuevers in there. It was hard for me to get out of his mind most times. It's just so much fun watching him be devious and I so want to share that thought process...As for the Grangers, there may be reference to that in the next one. I haven't decided. That scene really didn't enhance the plot here, but if I can find a good way to work it in, I'll be sure to do it. :) | |||
| LoveTheLife | 2006.05.24 - 07:11PM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| I have no more to say then. I LOVE IT! Can't wait till the third part of this story is out. :] Author's Response: Thanks a million. I have other projects going on, but I'm still planning the third installment in the back of my mind. :D | |||
| LoveTheLife | 2006.05.24 - 07:09PM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| I have no more to say then. I LOVE IT! Can't wait till the third part of this story is out. :] Author's Response: Thanks, Love. I'm glad that so many have enjoyed this story. It really warms my heart and spurs the muses on to write more. :) Which I hope to do soon. | |||
| Nathair | 2006.05.24 - 06:58PM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| OH.......wait there has to be more! PLEASE!!! I dont know that I can wait for the third installment. This is very good!! THANKS so much! Author's Response: Thanks, Nathair. Glad you enjoyed it, but I am quite sorry to report that there will be a wait for the next one. If you check my profile, I have my LJ listed and I do post fic updates on progress there. Generally once a week. | |||
| kanoni | 2006.05.24 - 03:36PM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| Loved this chapter! Hermione decided to stay with Lucius after all. And I loved Harry's reaction about Lucius being the daddy. Looking forward to the next installment! Author's Response: Thanks, kanoni. Yup, Hermione couldn't deny how she felt and the facts of the situation she was in. Harry...what can I say? He cracks me up. LOL I'll begin working on the next one hopefully some time in June. :) | |||
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